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The book was about animals who began animal revolution. First on the Manor farm lived Mr. Jones with his wife. One day, old pig Major had a dream about future where lives animals. After his death, animal drive a people from farm and named it Animal farm. They had seven laws witch tell them that person is bad. One of theirs mottos was - 2 legs bad, 4 legs good. From this moment animals works alone, and theirs boss was pig Napoleon and Snowball. Snowball wanted make wildmill and Napoleon wanted make guns for protection. One day people come here and fought with animals, but animals won. Napoleon trained dogs and then drove Snowball from the farm. Napoleon was the main boss and the biggest authority. He began trade with people and he had strict laws. People had come fight with animals, but they lost again. Some animals died. After some years there was a new generation of animals, who did not know about animals fights witch were in past. These animals has manners of people. They have radio, clothes and cigaretts. They was walking on 2 legs and in the end of this book people and animals are sitting next to one table and they have good relationships.[/b]
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Príspevok od používateľa Pilifo »

1. Nemáš to náhodou z translátoru?
2. Radšej by si mala hodiť slovenský text a možno by sa niekto podujal to urobiť.
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Najlepsie by fakt bolo, keby si to sem dal/a po slovensky.....
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